DLF

heres a very simple version of the critique for presentation. found it hard not to repeat anything that had already been said by others.
will work on it whn all the others are together.


‘The Dolphins’ chose to use a style of presentation that doesn’t do any harm to the project although it doesn’t do any favours either.
The Dolphins went for an extremely spaced out approach with only a few if not one point of interest on each page. There are many pages throughout the workbook have only one quote or similar on them and although they look nice when used occasionally, every second page is too much. It spaces out the information and adds un-needed pauses in the presentations flow. I got bored going through the presentation due to this fact.
The use of red dots is a predominant theme throughout the Dolphins presentation. They are rather bland although the vibrant colour scheme of red / magenta helps to contrast with the background. I don’t really understand where the dots come from; they seem almost a random occurrence.
The simple use of text on top of coloured boxes works well because it keeps the titles/sections easy to read and the presentation crisp.
Most of the pictures were well thought out, composed shots. Some of them came out blurry and out of focus but the overall quality of them is high. The bed shots could have had a bit more effort put into them in the sense of lighting and colour. The use of the whole page pictures credits the presentation because it keeps with the spaced out theme and makes the photos easier to view.